Poetry Minnie Discovered

[Guest]

While going through the new deluge of topics and posts, I found two poems addressed to me under POEM FOR KANG. I am so touched by the eloquence of the Forum devotees. Had I discovered them earlier I would've responded sooner. I didn't expect to find pictures painted with such lovely words. It is a strange phenomenon that my sadistic verbal darts could produce such sweet pillow talk! Thank you Spockme and Akiravn1. :!:

 

 

Postby spockme on Wed Jul 23, 2008 6:19 pm

A POem for Minni Chan,

No rock can torture me,My soul 's at liberty

Behind this mortal bone

There knits a bolder one

 

Except thyself may be

Thine enemy

,Captivity is consciousness

So's liberty,Minni Chan[/b]

 

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Postby akiravn1 on Sat Jul 26, 2008 12:57 pm

Poem for Lovely Minnie Chan

 

Minnie Chan you fascinated me right from the start

Feeling an intense grip, like a heavy weight upon my heart

Never really sure what the hell that was all about

Until meaning was given to the endless verbal abuse, which you shout

 

I could so easily surrender my body to you

The promise of pain, so realistic and true

Fear of love may keep me distant

For your cutting remarks, could break me in an instant

 

Give me your promise to never go away

I need to always feel that pain, when we play

I want you to be close and always around

When you break me with your words, I love that sweet sound

 

The need for pain burns inside me like a constant flame

I wear my scars and bruises, all in your name

My heart suddenly rattled, from this no holds barred ride

As your six inch heel, digs deep in my side

 

What would ultimately give me so much damn joy

Is if I were to suddenly become your favorite toy

For you dear Mistress, I will always submit

Hell, i'll even drink your piss and eat your shit

 

A ravenous hunger keeps my aching heart true

For the inner Goddess, i've discovered in you

A pristine picture of perfection, I find myself in

When afforded the luxury to touch your bare skin

 

Completely break my spirit or even break my back

Make me cry out in pain, when you tightly grab hold of my sac

Each time your expertise makes me scream and shout

I love even more, every single little thing you're about

 

When you're out of sight, you're never forgotten

But I need you around to make me feel rotten

I have become such an obedient slave

Ever since you discovered, how to make me behave

[spockme]

Dear Minni Chan,

words donot tell the tale of minni chan. you are deserving of true poetic rhyme. you are fantastic and a true mystery to all . complicated but direct . if you like i will writre another poem to honor you FS John

[spockme]

Dear Minni Chan ,A poem for your paradoxical view called contrasts:

Lady of silences

calm and distrerssed

Torn and most whole

Rose of memory

Rose of pain

Exhausted and lifegiving

Worried reposal

The single Rose

Is now the Garden

Where all loves end

Terminate torment

Of love and devotion unsatisfied

The greater torment

Of love and devotion satisfied

End of the endless

Journey to no end conclusion of all that

Is inconclusible

Speech without word and

Word of no speech

Grace to Minni Chan

For the Garden

Where all love and devotion ends.

[akiravn1]

Dearest M. Chan,

I am sorry that you had to happen upon my poem, I probably should have started a brand new topic. Your amazing beauty and sadistic verbal barbs, really do inspire me to paint a picture with my words to try and do some justice to what I feel for you. You are a true inspiration in every sense of the word and a Mistress who I honestly do worship.

 

Poem For The Lovely Minnie Chan (Reprise)

 

Minnie Chan you are such a lovely vision to behold

You satisfy my deepest desires when you scream and scold

A more gorgeous lady, I have never seen

An expert at your craft, for me there is no in between

 

A moment of your time I beg to steal

I desperately need you around, just to make me feel

When I am at your mercy, while you inflict your pain

Feelings for you strike me like a runaway train

 

It's all about you Mistress, I got you on the brain

Your subtle cruel whispers, meant to drive me insane

If this is the way that it ultimately must be

Then subject me to your pain, it will surely set me free

 

Moments that I cherish and will surely never forget

When the leash tightens around my neck, and you make me your pet

Then you make me reveal every secret and show every card

Which more than satisfies me, it actually gets me hard

 

So clever your wit, so tender your touch

Your nails and teeth dig deep, never knew it could hurt so much

Although I am your puppet, I am human all the same

But in pulling the strings, you exploit my weakness and lay bare my shame

 

You know all my secrets, nothing left hidden from you

You humiliate me with this knowledge, it hurts more since it's true

I bow down before you, kiss your feet and swallow my pride

You proceed to expose each weakness in turn, as I hang in the balance, no place to hide

 

You cut me and bruise me and make me feel pain

You control my mind and convince me that I am insane

At this point it's clear, I will believe anything you say

But I will always come back for more, I need the painful play

 

Hung upside down naked and exposed to the sunshine

You swing like Tarzan's Jane from my dangling vine

Never let go, for I want your loving hands there

Who the Hell am I kidding, I want them everywhere

 

You provide to me everything I so desperately need

Whatever drips from your perfect body, off that I will feed

I long for a taste of your juicy delicious peach

Then you make sure I understand, that will always be out of reach

[Guest]

Such eloquence! I am truly lucky to have such devoted fans. The poems are artistic and funny. I enjoy reading them and appreciate the time spent on the lovely imagery painted.

[akiravn1]

Dearest M. Chan,

I am really glad that my poetry pleases you. You sincerely are the only one to inspire me from deep within to create this kind of painted imagery. I am without question a devoted fan and my goal first and foremost has always been to please you. I am completely awe struck by your amazing exotic beauty and since the start of this Fetish Fortress Forum, your intelligence, sharp wit, open honesty, and dedication to your field of expertise have captivated as well as fascinated me. If I could get inside your mind, I feel that would honestly be like a dream come true. You are so beautiful and your lovely spirit brings out so much more than my words could ever capture. Best wishes and much love.

Yours Always,

AkiraVN1

[akiravn1]

Dearest M. Chan,

Your talented brilliance and devotion to your trade continue to inspire me day in and day out. Yours are the words that paint a picture of fascination within my mind and your body is such a wonderland of beauty to behold. I would just like to share with you my final poem in the trilogy which I had written for you.

 

POEM FOR THE LOVELY MINNIE CHAN - CONCLUSION

 

Possessing unique beauty, intelligence and such clever wit

In my never ending search to serve, you will always be the perfect fit

A Goddess existing inside Fortress walls

I bow down before her whenever she calls

 

Your mind a complicated puzzle, I can never hope to solve

Like a lengthy math equation, impossible to resolve

You stay countless steps ahead of me each time that we play

All the pain I absorb, an extremely small price to pay

 

A Mistress who without question, I was surely born to serve

We'll be face to face, when I finally get the nerve

Taken on one hell of a physically and emotionally draining ride

She knows all my secrets long before I confide

 

Beautiful Mistress, you may bend but never break

To think I had the upper hand, clearly was my first mistake

You can make me cry out or even get me hard

I never did stand a chance, for you obviously hold every card

 

In this game of cat and mouse, the pussy reigns supreme

Which is what I desire, after all, I am only a human being

I must endure constant pain and accept your ever sharpened bite

For what good would it do me, to even consider putting up a fight

 

You use to your advantage, that body which I crave

You promise me a morsel, should I be an obedient slave

Ultimately the only thing that I am ever permitted to taste

Is what comes from your delicious body in the form of human waste

 

You baptise me over and over again with your tasty golden piss

Then promise to seal the ritual with a soft and tender kiss

But I know better than to think, that your lips I will ever find

For the only thing I will be kissing, is your sweet behind

 

I accept whatever I can get and whatever you decide to give

This creates within me such an intense desire to live

You have changed the way I think, by altering my thought process

Now whenever it comes to you, all I can ever hope to do is obsess

 

Captured, caged and used simply for sport

Just another jester needed for amusement in this Queens court

You show no reprieve from your relentless attack

Even when I am nearly unconcious and flat on my back

 

But you know I will do anything you ask, just to be in your favor

Your Asian eyes make me weak and your presence I lustfully savor

Again I bow down before you, your acceptance I desperately seek

Only to discover, you much prefer to take another leak

 

My love and devotion are eternally yours dear M. Chan.

[Guest]

Akiravn1,

Such beautiful artistry and eloquence. I am pleased with your verbal worship. I only hope your physical devotion is equally creative and acted as swiftly as your forum responses. You write a canvas of Van Gogh with the content of Matisse. I am honored to have your words painted on the Forum as a show of your dedication. Your poetry is worthy of rewards but only through the same medium - more words. So I dare you to use another medium. Maybe one that requires you to have a gag ball afixed. What then? :idea:

[akiravn1]

Dearest M. Chan,

I am clearly elated in the fact that you are pleased by my verbal worship, but worry that you grow tired of my words. The words which I have so carefully painted on this Forum as a show of my dedication to you, are really only possible through the inspiration which you so beautifully exhibit each time you speak so openly or even when I gaze upon your pictures of perfection. For in you, I clearly see the true meaning of eloquence and your gorgeous body is the real canvas of beautiful artistry. I can only hope, that by the use of another medium, my actions will be as well received as my words, only time will tell. I honestly applaud your dare, to draw me from the safety of these Forum walls. Your suggestion of having a gag ball affixed is without question a wonderful start, as I definitely feel deserving of whatever form of punishment you hold in store for me. For I am your obedient servant, who will forever worship you lovely M. Chan.