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Team Fortress

 

"Meet the Characters" yet to be written

 

At the Base

 

Lady Admin sits behind her desk, reading mails etc.

 

Aside her is a radar with some radio's.

 

She answers the telephone, writes some stuff and hangs up.

 

At the lounge at the base

 

Camera view on leg height

 

Few ladies show up, talking laughing

 

Miss Ree: "That was a delicious ice-cream!"

Miss Jung: "Yeah, it's so hot today!"

Miss Zhao: "You call this hot?"

 

And then on:

 

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Team Fortress

 

"Meet the Characters" yet to be written

 

At the Base

 

Lady Admin sits behind her desk, reading mails etc.

 

Aside her is a radar with some radio's.

 

She answers the telephone, writes some stuff and hangs up.

 

At the lounge at the base

 

Camera view on leg height

 

Few ladies show up, talking laughing

 

Miss Ree: "That was a delicious ice-cream!"

Miss Jung: "Yeah, it's so hot today!"

Miss Zhao: "You call this hot?"

 

And then on:

 

Stinger

 

Huh? What is mistresskung.blogspot.com?

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Huh? What is mistresskung.blogspot.com?

 

Mistress Ree,

 

Big agree on the question. Is that supposed to be a tribute blog? As for the Team Fortress thing, what position would the lovely Ree be? I was going to make a joke about a character class and swap in Ree for a syllable, turns out I cannot. Clearly not worthy to serve you :(

 

I'm guessing he was going to frame up Mistress Zhao as a Pyro.

 

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Mistress Ree,

 

Big agree on the question. Is that supposed to be a tribute blog? As for the Team Fortress thing, what position would the lovely Ree be? I was going to make a joke about a character class and swap in Ree for a syllable, turns out I cannot. Clearly not worthy to serve you :(

 

I'm guessing he was going to frame up Mistress Zhao as a Pyro.

 

-monokuro

 

Hmm, dominating an ice cream apparently <_<

What do you mean by swapping me for a syllable? A, B, C, D, Ree, F, G!

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Mistress Ree,

 

Big agree on the question. Is that supposed to be a tribute blog? As for the Team Fortress thing, what position would the lovely Ree be? I was going to make a joke about a character class and swap in Ree for a syllable, turns out I cannot. Clearly not worthy to serve you :(

 

I'm guessing he was going to frame up Mistress Zhao as a Pyro.

 

-monokuro

 

I do like the superhero slant.

This could turn into an interesting script for a short film...about pudding.

Or according to my pyro character, pudding flambé

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Thank you Mistress Ree :)

 

Your Team Fortress character is the whizmiss

I have just written more with a sub-title and a Vampire story

 

Whizmiss? That's it? .....What does a "whizmiss" do, exactly? What special power does it wield?

 

To be honest i'm not too crazy about that title. Can you think of a different name? Whizmiss just gives me the mental image of a small boy learning how to pee in the toilet for the first time and missing and spraying pee all over the bathroom lol.

 

I read Empress Zhao and it's okay, but i think it lacks the drama that a scene like that (Zhao feeding on Ahn's blood, yum) deserves.

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Whizmiss? That's it? .....What does a "whizmiss" do, exactly? What special power does it wield?

 

To be honest i'm not too crazy about that title. Can you think of a different name? Whizmiss just gives me the mental image of a small boy learning how to pee in the toilet for the first time and missing and spraying pee all over the bathroom lol.

 

I read Empress Zhao and it's okay, but i think it lacks the drama that a scene like that (Zhao feeding on Ahn's blood, yum) deserves.

 

 

Strangely enough a Whizmiss who sprays her pee all over, has a certain appeal to me.

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Whizmiss? That's it? .....What does a "whizmiss" do, exactly? What special power does it wield?

 

To be honest i'm not too crazy about that title. Can you think of a different name? Whizmiss just gives me the mental image of a small boy learning how to pee in the toilet for the first time and missing and spraying pee all over the bathroom lol.

 

I read Empress Zhao and it's okay, but i think it lacks the drama that a scene like that (Zhao feeding on Ahn's blood, yum) deserves.

A whizmiss is like a whiz, wizz, so wizzmiss would be better?

You're using technology towards the aliens.

Hahaha, peeing would be quite useful!

 

Empress Zhao will be containing all the Players, and one will be the hero.

Note that the story is about 1/9 and it's getting ketchuppy

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A whizmiss is like a whiz, wizz, so wizzmiss would be better?

You're using technology towards the aliens.

Hahaha, peeing would be quite useful!

 

Empress Zhao will be containing all the Players, and one will be the hero.

Note that the story is about 1/9 and it's getting ketchuppy

 

Acid pee, melting anything it touches............

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